boys are on the astro playing football*
*The ball gets kicked over by Harry*
Harry: Go get the Ball Rellik I CBA.
Rellik: No whys it always me who has to get it?
Jack: Because your the worse footballer
*All the other boys laugh*
Rellik: Shut Up Jack, it's always me who has to do and get everything.
Harry: Just go get the ball you Dirty little orphan
Rellik: What did you just call me
Harry: Both of your parents are dead aint they? So your a dirty little orphan
Rellik: You will Regret that.
*Runs out of the astro crying*
Alex: That was a bit harsh don't you think?
Jack: Shut up Alex he deserved it.
*Alex goes quiet again*
*A few hours later the boys go home*
*Harry walks the other way*
Harry: See you later lads yeah
The rest of the boys: Yeah see you later mate.
*As Harry is walking down the first alley he hears a noise, he quickly turns around but nothing is there. He keeps on walking before hearing something run past him, he turns around again but again nothing is there. He then starts to run but just as hes about to run down a alley he gets pushed into the trees by Rellik*
Harry: LEAVE ME ALONE PLEASE LEAVE ME ALONE!
*With in seconds Harry is dead*
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